Tell me what you think of my poem - beautiful girls sharking
Once he was convinced that my true love, someone who was so beautiful as a dove, but came to reality when she decided to go to update my soul, and vanished like a summer breeze, it is prettiest girl in the world, I wanted an angel and the duration of our relationship has been granted, you can never speak the mind again, because they do not even resolved to my friend, God knows why it keeps me from being just the picture, and I once again an example maybe it's a dream that was back to life for a few months, I wonder who has the sense that as soon as I sit, I just know that was all that was needed, but as monuvered a shark that waits for to bleed me to prove that I am in the fall, and all was something that I do not know, maybe one day they will realize that I was the only person who can take all your needs and desires in most eligible wondered if ever you decide to pursue the cause of his age, attractive, seems to have fun, but the apple of the eye, not just once live every day with the choices you make, do I set chaRACT, made it sure that I all you fake to the character and that is not even know
Thursday, January 28, 2010
Beautiful Girls Sharking Tell Me What You Think Of My Poem
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16 comments:
There is much bitterness in this poem.
WOW really lucky only the year is admirable poem or a poem, the girl has great talent as the base year is really beautiful. Years I feel words are from year to deliver heart. Poem of the Year is really exciting. its wonderful. I wish I could write poetry like the year that is really meaningful and sweet
thts longO.O
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Do not press the girl if she does not love more .. = D
Your poem is good, but if it feels a bit strange with all these words and tissues.
Roses are red, violets are blue, I love being a Jew, but this poem is blown
too long ... make it shorter and the contrast is more ...
OH DATS SO BE SWEETU WRITER AA
OH DATS SO BE SWEETU WRITER AA
Oh, that's so sad that the work, but hey, in the poem 8 / 10 Bravo I could not do better !!!!!!!!!
The poems are long and boring!
It is a poem of Nice
not like a poem
Where's the poem?
its ok. that doen absolutely crazy.
its ok. that doen absolutely crazy.
Luv it! Sounds like I wrote sum
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